school paper cartoon strip

a cartoon i made for our school paper.. it was requested in black and white so i didn't put any color on it..

This by the way is based on true events.. yup! there was a brawl during our intramurals' basketball competition between a freshman and a sophomore so i thought i'd make a cartoon about it.. (although i exaggerated in drawing the fight scene)

the people talking below are saying: "should we stop them?"
"maybe later in about 5 minutes.."



this is my first time doing a cartoon since i usually draw mecha..
i'd appreciate comments if any..